Evaluation of treatment

Overall, the treatment of our story went well. However , there was some feedback which allowed us to think about our short film and evaluate it on how we can slightly modify it to improve and make it to the best of our abilities.
One of the main criticisms was that 5 actors was way too  much. It would be very difficult to manage, however for us we think it is an issue which we can manage as we have already got a few actors who are extremely reliable and we definitely believe it would not be a problem for us to actually get the final actors.
Another criticism is that as it is a thriller, we had to make sure that the content was very gripping and that it did not move to a comedy. So that is something we have to work on in our short film in order to be able to stick to the theme and make it an effective short film. We can do this with various things such as the actual script down to the music or even the actual camera shots.
Although we mentioned that our film will have minimum dialogue, it will have to have a little bit of dialogue and we have agreed to create a script. However we have to make sure that there is not that much as it is very difficult to create a good film with correct dialogue.